How can I change my cover letter to sound more for an entry level - electrical engineering position?

I'm not familiar with your field of expertise but I've written my share of resumes and cover letters so I'll offer a suggestion. Include a paragraph where you state in your own words something to the effect of "having a personal philosophy where you believe in earning your knowledge from the ground up so that you are able to understand the business from all aspects." There is an old saying in business that "only the cream and the s rise to the top" and right now you want to show them you're the cream. (Of course if they want s you may wish to reconsider if this is a company you want to work for) As you form the paragraph stating you are willing to work from the ground up you may want to say something about the benefits of seeing things through the eyes of others as well as the customers who deal with people on different levels. (If that applies in this case. I don't know how the company works so I'm just throwing out suggestions. If you choose to go with that line of thinking tailor it to fit the way the business operates.) Between the skills you already possess and what you would learn as you climb the corporate ladder "the potential is there for you to become a valuable et to the company and you are certain by working together you can contribute to the company's continued health and gowth." Okay.... one more thing and remember this as you go through the business world. A corporation is like a tree full of monkeys. The monkeys at the top look down and see lots of smiling faces. The monkeys at the bottom look up and see nothing but a$$holes. Best of luck to you.